Hi Dominic! I think you did an awesome job with this project! Overall, I really like all of your photos and I think they're all very creative! I especially like your psychological photo. Although I don't really understand what it means, I think it's creative. Honestly, I think not knowing what exactly it means makes it even better! The framing and composition all look good too. Your environmental photo is also really interesting. I like how you used the long exposure with flash to make yourself pretty much see through. My thought when i first saw this was that you did that so we could see more of the environment...? Which i think is really creative. I do think that maybe you could've reframed it a little to get more of the piano in it. Finally, your Document photo looks good too. I personally like the light to dark contrast of you and the background. However, I think for a document portrait, there should be less negative space. I would maybe try a vertical photo and get more of just your face so that it is the main focus of the shot. Good job with this project and keep up the good work!
I would first like to start off by saying that your photo for the environmental is amazing. I love the way you have yourself faded out. I think one of the best things about photos is how angles can change a whole photo. Like for example your first photo with the boat showed a great angle. The only thing I will critique is that I wish maybe more light was used in the process but other than that good job.
Hi Dominic! I think you did an awesome job with this project! Overall, I really like all of your photos and I think they're all very creative! I especially like your psychological photo. Although I don't really understand what it means, I think it's creative. Honestly, I think not knowing what exactly it means makes it even better! The framing and composition all look good too. Your environmental photo is also really interesting. I like how you used the long exposure with flash to make yourself pretty much see through. My thought when i first saw this was that you did that so we could see more of the environment...? Which i think is really creative. I do think that maybe you could've reframed it a little to get more of the piano in it. Finally, your Document photo looks good too. I personally like the light to dark contrast of you and the background. However, I think for a document portrait, there should be less negative space. I would maybe try a vertical photo and get more of just your face so that it is the main focus of the shot. Good job with this project and keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteI would first like to start off by saying that your photo for the environmental is amazing. I love the way you have yourself faded out. I think one of the best things about photos is how angles can change a whole photo. Like for example your first photo with the boat showed a great angle. The only thing I will critique is that I wish maybe more light was used in the process but other than that good job.
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