Hello Dominic! I think you are off to a really good start with your project. I can tell you are photographing someone who is a musician.. However, I could not make that distinction until the 2nd to last image. I like what you were going for with capturing how a musician loads and unloads their car with all of their equipment. I think that is definitely an important part of a musician's process that you should keep in your essay. I would suggest maybe trying it with a more neutral background, because the cars and house are a little distracting and take focus away from the subject. Also, I think that it might be more helpful to the viewer to have your first photo include the guy's face and maybe even his instrument. I think it will be cool to see the whole process of his music career (gigs, practice etc.). I think that you definitely have a good start and you'll for sure be able to use at least one of these images in your final project! Good job with this Dominic!
Hello Dominic!
ReplyDeleteI think you are off to a really good start with your project. I can tell you are photographing someone who is a musician.. However, I could not make that distinction until the 2nd to last image. I like what you were going for with capturing how a musician loads and unloads their car with all of their equipment. I think that is definitely an important part of a musician's process that you should keep in your essay. I would suggest maybe trying it with a more neutral background, because the cars and house are a little distracting and take focus away from the subject. Also, I think that it might be more helpful to the viewer to have your first photo include the guy's face and maybe even his instrument. I think it will be cool to see the whole process of his music career (gigs, practice etc.). I think that you definitely have a good start and you'll for sure be able to use at least one of these images in your final project! Good job with this Dominic!